Ever Wanted to Write Your Own Book?

Here’s a cool idea.

Have you ever thought up an interesting story that your REALLY wanted to tell? Or thought to yourself… “Self, why doesn’t anybody ever write books about 3-legged magical hamsters who star in their own reality TV show?” (Um, or something similar.. you get the idea…)

Write your own book! You Are Here: Jordan blogger Ayat did. She wrote a story called Stardust about a sand cat who is bullied. Click here to see more about her story.

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Then, SHARE YOUR STORY IDEA in the comments section below. C’mon… bet you have an awesome idea. Tell us stuff like…

– Who’s the main character?
– Is it a funny story or a sad one?
– Will the reader learn something from it?
– Where does it take place?
– What’s the problem or BIG thing that happens in the plot that will make people excited to read all the way through to the end?

 

Comments

  1. Emma
    March 18, 2009, 2:03 pm

    I love the idea of writing a book. I’m writing two (and finished one)!

  2. WritingStar
    March 19, 2009, 10:24 pm

    I love to write and I am working on two books of my own but I often get stuck. Any suggestions on what I should name my big giant villian that is suppossed to fight my very adventereous little hero? Thank you for replying also!!

  3. purple_hippos:-)
    March 20, 2009, 12:45 pm

    I love to write and have won many awards for my writings. When I grow up I plan to write a novel.

  4. spock9
    March 20, 2009, 6:54 pm

    Cool. I’m writing my own book, too!

  5. dolphinswimmer12
    March 20, 2009, 7:31 pm

    Hi I’m new to this blog. I’ve seen spock9′s name a lot a lot. I love to read too!

  6. christina
    March 20, 2009, 11:10 pm

    i want to learn more

  7. dolphinswimmer12
    March 23, 2009, 2:00 pm

    I am writing a book right now it is harder than i thought I want to be an author when i grow up. My book’s about a girl who meets a guy who takes her to another universe thats in danger Would any of you read it?

  8. spock9
    March 23, 2009, 9:23 pm

    I’ll read it. Sounds awesome. What’s the title?

  9. Flora
    March 24, 2009, 10:50 am

    This site has given me a marvellous idea of writing a book.This was my dream but needed a little courage and detarmination too a pinch of faith in myself to make my dreams come true.

    March 24,2009,8:20 PM

  10. dolphinswimmer12
    March 24, 2009, 11:20 am

    I cant decide Silver Bridge or Dark Violet. Dark Violet is the villian. Silver Bridge is the city shes trying to destroy. Which title do you like? thanks for saying you would read it

  11. spock9
    March 26, 2009, 8:29 am

    You should make the main character, the good guy, Violet, and the villain Rose. You could make the title Dark Violet or Black Rose.

  12. lyncopeland
    March 26, 2009, 11:17 am

    I think it would be awesome to write a book! I have a notebook full of short story’s! I think a cool story idea would be about a town under a tree!

  13. dolphinswimmer12
    March 26, 2009, 11:18 am

    I never thought of that Thanks spock9 I think i’ll make the title Black Rose!

  14. vikmayhew
    March 26, 2009, 11:51 am

    I am writing a book about a magical cell phone!

  15. dolphinswimmer12
    March 27, 2009, 6:12 pm

    Is the villian aboy or a girl,WritingStar. What is your book about spock9?

  16. Bridget2299
    March 27, 2009, 7:07 pm

    I just finished a true story about me being in the back of the car when somebody came in and stole my moms wallet. I think it would be so cool if kids got books published so that kids could read books by kids!

  17. 85doggie85
    March 28, 2009, 9:35 am

    Do you guys think a story about a blue dog and a pink bunny is cool?

  18. haimay1998
    March 28, 2009, 11:47 am

    Yeah, I really want to write this story about a bunch of middle school kids and they are all really strange and nobody hangs with them. They have like powers, BUT NOT LIKE SPIDERMAN OR THE X-MENR SOMETHING COMICY! They have like minds powers and stuff and sometimes they act up. It’s really cool! I just have NO idea how to format it on paper! YIKES! Any tips, hints, commets, or tricks PlEASE SAY somthing below with my user name in it.

  19. Anonymous
    March 30, 2009, 10:03 am

    I really want to write a book of my own too, ‘cos it gives me a sense of accomplishment, but I always get stuck in the conclusion. Any advice?

  20. dolphinswimmer12
    March 30, 2009, 10:38 am

    Wow haimay1998 your book sounds really cool When i write I get a piece of paper and write down names things places ect that i want to use then i organize them into ideas for chapters. hope this helps

  21. cool_panda_kid
    March 31, 2009, 11:29 pm

    I love writing and would love to get published someday. I have finnished two chapter books and I’m very close to finnishing my third. The third one is nearly 60 pages long!

  22. kiki9808
    April 2, 2009, 4:30 pm

    Hi Jorden i’m new to the website. I was looking through the blogs when yours. What you did was really neat. I am trying to write my own book called GALAXYWARS. I based it on my family and friends. I hope to get my story published in June or July. Please could you give a tip in trying to finish a book?

  23. spock9
    April 5, 2009, 10:03 pm

    You’re welcome. Btw vikmayhew, that’ll be a …. weird story. No offense.

  24. becca101
    April 7, 2009, 6:47 pm

    i have made my own poem book before and it was bunches of fun and i the future i hopr to write new ones all my books are published and in some stores in ameerica my name is becca101
    please write back i think you are so awsome

    thanls from america
    becca101

  25. Deryn13
    April 10, 2009, 10:54 pm

    I love to write fantasy stories. One day I might try to get something published, but first I need to finish them! My story is about a witch, a shapeshifter, and a werewolf who have to save a dragon’s egg from an evil sorceress.

  26. Deryn13
    April 12, 2009, 3:16 pm

    I’m also writing a story called Rising Storm about a girl who is an elf princess (but doesn’t know it), a sorceress who is trying to kidnap her, and a boy who can control weather. My goal is to get a book written and published before I’m 18.

  27. Deryn13
    April 12, 2009, 3:18 pm

    spock9, what’s your book about?

  28. Anonymous
    April 13, 2009, 8:17 pm

    I’m also a girl thats writing my own book! It’s called Black Sunset. Its about a boy who is learning to control fire by his true love Veris Black (hence the username). He has to defeat an evil queen with his friends before the sunset on a lunar eclipse, or the world itself with collapse under the power that is released.
    I’m also writing another book and this one is in the present. It’s called In Their Hands. Its about 4 people with superpowers including mind moving, fire (I like fire!), Force fields, invisibility, speed, mind reading, ice and strength (They each have 2 powers) If you could plz reply and tell me what you think I would be so happy!

  29. Resa
    April 17, 2009, 9:44 am

    That sounds awsome said I have the same problem as spock9, writing the conclusin.

  30. MaryJane
    May 12, 2009, 6:40 am

    I like the idea of writing a book…
    Well, I am doing it rigft now.. xP
    I have some ideas for the book i want to write. I thought about writing it, like about a year or something ago, but my teacher forced me to write this year.. I have to finish it at the end of my next clas, but i still don’t know wich story to pick out..
    I don’t know,if I should pick one about mythology and that stuf (mythology creatures for my book: vampires, werewolves and ghosts) or one with a girl, who helps her best friends to say no to drugs, and falls in love with the most popular boy on the school… well, both ideas are stupid, but my head is empty, so i can’t get any other ideas..
    but i still have to choose the place for the hapening. i thought about somwhere in usa, and i’m from slovenia so i don’t know many places there.. can someone please help me with that?? thanks.
    by the way, i’m going to check if stardust is in our library and if it is, i’m going to read it..
    hands up for all of you guys & girls!! greetings from slovenia!

  31. gobuffsabres
    May 22, 2009, 1:43 pm

    im totally going 2 be a writer!! i m writing a few now. youll have to wait till it is published to hear about my favorite though,but i’ll tell u this: it involves magic, mystery and mayhem!! :) another one is about a girl and her friend that gets lost in the amazon rainforest and have to work together to survive. what do u think about a story where a kid gets lost in an imaginary world?? im also thinking about writing a story of my life, except using different names 4 me my friends and family. have any other “story starters” 4 me??? I would really appreciate it if u would answer!! :)
    i get stuck on conclusions 2… i get reaaly mad!!!
    MaryJane, wheres slovenia??

  32. gobuffsabres
    May 24, 2009, 12:25 pm

    do you guys think i should start a historical fiction theme or a fantasy theme…i have ideas for both.

  33. audball6
    May 28, 2009, 1:08 pm

    In my 4th grade class we made real hard back books! it was a lot of fun!

  34. ask468
    May 29, 2009, 2:01 pm

    I am writing a short story that is called the islander. It is about a man from France named Pierre who loves to sail and goes out to sail and gets caught in a storm and lands on an island and makes a log cabin. then goes to anouther island and found a little boy whose name is Alexander whose parents died in a battle against some other people. Alexander tells the man what the name of the two islands are, Nagasaki and little Nagasaki. Alexander is not very sure about Pierre because he looks exactly like the men his family fought against and lost. What else do you think should happen next?

  35. ask468
    May 29, 2009, 2:03 pm

    gobuffsabres, I think you should write a historical fiction theme.

  36. gobuffsabres
    May 30, 2009, 12:36 pm

    ask468,
    thanks, i think i will do a historical fiction.

    in your book, i think that Pierre should earn Alexandre’s trust and help him get off the island. and then in the end it turns out that Pierre knew his parents and Alexandre comes to live with him??

    maybe???

  37. DarkWolfGirl
    June 6, 2009, 8:00 pm

    Haiymay, usually when I try to write a book I brainstorm. Ok, I want this, No this doesn’t sound cool. You will find out what you want to do eventually!

  38. musemagfan13
    June 15, 2009, 10:01 pm

    ok, so i cannot see someone’s screen name, so i shall call you verisblack. ok? just wanted to tell you: i LOVE fire and superpowers, too! also, i am kinda obsessed with twins. here are all the sets of twins in various books: kevin and jax, demetri and gideon, julia and domovoi,…gosh. i think i have more, cant remember. ask468, is your book set in world war 2? yes, dolphinswimmer, i would indeed read your book. sounds awesome! hey MaryJane, you know what I do? i pick things that seem everyday, or even weird things, and i twist them a bit. like making up kid superheroes? or taking the name “sherlock holmes” and giving it to a present-day seventh grade boy? (those are my ideas btw, please dont take ‘em). IM DONE TALKING NOW.

  39. girltlk12
    June 20, 2009, 5:22 pm

    Hey I have a bunch of ideas for writing a book but I am not sure which one to choose how do I decide? PLEASE HELP ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  40. ask468
    June 27, 2009, 12:08 pm

    girltlk12, this author came to my school a couple of years ago and and told us how to sometimes write a book. First you think about what type of story you want to write about, either a mystery, a fairy tale, wahtever yuo want. Then he said that a lot of times he would just spin around, while closing his eyes, and then open them. Whatever he saw he would write about.

  41. Bookhead
    June 29, 2009, 11:30 pm

    I am writing a book and I plan to write a couple novels. I am 11 years old. I want to write a new york times bestseller. in the book I am writing, the main character is a boy named oliver; he travels with a band of gypsies and trains with the camp’s fire eater. the story starts when his camp is burned down and his teacher and friends killed. he takes off through the country to find the evil king who did it. i need a name for the king and a motive for it. the king is also supposed to be a professional fire eater. I need ideas. I’m only on page 12 or so, and I know i have a long way to go. The book is called Oliver the Fire Dancer.

  42. Bookhead
    July 3, 2009, 11:13 pm

    I chose Bovar as the name for the king. I still need a reason though. maybe he thought they would rebel or something

  43. dramaqueen
    July 6, 2009, 6:31 pm

    I really want to write a book but now that I’ve seen the ideas you guys have, I’m embarrased to share mine.

  44. Shamrockwhisker
    July 11, 2009, 11:00 am

    My book is about two friends who have powers.
    they both can be animals. one is a wolf, the other, a mountain lion. One of team is Fern. She is very smart, especially when it comes to animals. She is also too brave for her own good.
    the other is Griffin. He isn’t really that smart…academically….. but he can out smart his foster parents any day. i wrote it for school, so it isn’t that good….

  45. arianamus
    July 14, 2009, 5:54 pm

    I’ve already written twenty-three books. Most of them in Kindergarten and first grade. Those weren’t very good, though. But now I’m in fourth grade, and I wrote a book. It’s about my third grade class going to a party and our parents came also. A man who made an invention to become invisable kidnapps the parents so the class of twenty has to find them. Along the way, they find gagets, comfert, notes, and lots and lots of trouble. When I first read three chapters of my book to my class, I found that it was a class favorite. It’s going to be a series. I’m writing my second one called, On Another Planet. It’s about the class going to a different planet, sent by there master, Manny, and they have to stop the most dangerous plot that the planet has ever econtered.

  46. Anonymous
    July 15, 2009, 12:19 pm

    I love to type! I started in first grade!! My story is called Prince. It’s about a cat who is spoiled rotten. Their name is Prince. When Prince’s owner dies, he’s sent to the animal shelter and makes friends with the animals. When he finds out when you stay too long at an animal shelter, you get killed. Prince wants to find a way to let all pets free and find a home. Will he do that? This story is about love, sadness, silly times, and times that make you MAD!

  47. DolphinDreamz
    August 9, 2009, 8:00 pm

    I LOVE to write!I have currently writing a Shrlock Holmes mystery and a historical fiction about a colonial girl.Purplehippos:-),that is sooo cool that you have won awards for your writing!WritingStar,here’s an idea for your villain’s name,Garganthian.(It was all I could come up with.)
    doplhinswimmer12 I would read your book!Flora,I hope you write the next book on the Bestseller’s List!Cool story Haimay1998!i love your idea lyncopeland!Very cool cool_panda_kid!Becca101, I write poetry too!(I love Emily Dickinson!)Said,I like your idea for the book In Their Hands! Gobuffsabres,I looovveee your book ideas!I can’t wait until their published!I agree with ask468.You should defidently write historical fiction!Cool book Bookhead!Don’t be embarassed drama queen!I’m sure I’ll love it!I liked your story shamrockwhisper,but there has already been a sereies like that.(Animorphs)I like your story,Prince,said.

  48. DolphinDreamz
    August 10, 2009, 8:26 am

    I hope I can become a blogger!That would be really cool!

  49. DolphinDreamz
    August 10, 2009, 9:52 am

    I’m a little stuck on what should happen in my historical fiction.

    The Mystery of the Vanishing Jewel

    The hero of the story(Amanda)is a kid spy for George Washington’s army.She was sent on an over night mission looking for the jewel ‘Victoria’ which has made all the difference in peace and war in the fued between England and America.As shes climbing up the stairs to her room her Aunt Millie sees her and refuses to let her go to the camp this week.Then she slowly sulks to her room.What should happen next?Do you think I have done a good job writing my book?And most of all would you read it?

  50. Bookhead
    August 13, 2009, 11:10 pm

    I would definetly read your book DolphinDreamz! Sounds exciting. Maybe Amanda should sneak out?

  51. DolphinDreamz
    September 2, 2009, 7:21 pm

    Thanks!That’s a great idea I will have to use it.

  52. writergirl23
    September 5, 2009, 7:36 pm

    I have written storybooks since I was six, and I hope to become a published author soon.

  53. DolphinDreamz
    September 9, 2009, 6:40 pm

    writegirl23,that’s one of my goals too.

  54. girltlk12
    September 19, 2009, 2:05 am

    I have been writing books since the 3rd grade and I was never able to finish it cuz I got so busy. But now I am working on 2 and I’ve come up with a name for the first one and have over 71 pages written!! I want to be an author when I get older. I love writing! I’ve stayed up for over 12 hours writing b4. So I need a name for my second book it is about a girl that has powers but doesn’t know it. But she figures out when she turns 13. BUT THE POWERS AREN’T LIKE SHOOTING LASERS OR SOMETHING!!!! It is seeing things or whatever you want to call it. It’s like reading minds and seeing ghosts and angels and demons. But she still has to deal with normal problems like popular girls, boys, and oh evil cheerleaders. Like evil evil. Not just High School evil. PLEASE Help me with a title!!!!
    P.S I KNOW THIS IS LONG SORRY LIKE I SAID I LOVE WRITING LOL

  55. girltlk12
    September 19, 2009, 6:13 am

    I just came up with a completely random question. How many of you think it would be cool if, since we are all writing stories, we could post them on the site and see what other people think? So we could see what people think of them before we get them published(If we do).
    TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!

  56. DolphinDreamz
    September 28, 2009, 10:21 am

    Maybe your book could be called Crystal Clear. And the girl could be Crystal. Girltlk12,I like your blog idea.

  57. arianamus
    October 2, 2009, 8:54 am

    Okay. The book I’m writing right now is called “Waterfall”. The three main characters are Alexndrea, an eleven year old girl who collects pebbles, Ian, a sixteen year old boy who doesn’t care very much for Alexandrea, and Jamie, Ian’s twin sister who’s always being polite and absolutly has to see her boyfriend, Gabe, every day of her life. This story I’m writing is ery different from my other storys because it’s a very sad one. It’s not very funny at all. “Waterfall” takes place in a stream in Alexandrea’s backyard. This leads to the plot, so listen carefully. Alexandrea collects pebbles from the stream in her backyard. One day she finds a very unique purple pebble and decides to keep it. Her grandparents are coming for Thanksgiving si Alexandrea decides to clean up her messy room. She gets so tired of it, she wishes that her family could hire a maid to clean up for a change. Just then, the doorbell rings and it’s a maid. So Alexandrea decides to test the pebble to see if it’s magic and it is! Don’t go, this is the good part. Alexandrea tells Ian that the pebble is magic and he doesn’t believe her. Alexandrea tries to convince him that it’s real, but he still doesn’t listen so they get into this silly arguement. Then Alexandrea accedently wishes that Ian was very very sick and would never get better! So Ian got really sick and alexandrea couldn’t find the pebble anywhere. I think you would want to keep readig my book because it’s very emotional and very magical and there’s so many very impertant events that take you through to the end. I may be only 9, but if you ask my friends, they’ll say I’m a great author. (I don’t mean to brag or anything like that)

  58. arianamus
    October 2, 2009, 8:56 am

    I really like your idea, girltlk12.

  59. arianamus
    October 2, 2009, 9:02 am

    girltlk12,
    I think I could come up with a title for your book. Mybe it could be somehting like 13 demons. Or even better! The Underworld Above Us. Tell me what you think!

  60. Ford
    October 2, 2009, 9:09 am

    The title of my book is Cars Cars Cars. The main characters are named David and Sam. My story is funny because David and Sam do a lot of crazy things. The reader will not learn something from this because it’s just funny and adenturus. The setting is mostly at a car rcing track or David and Sam’s house. My story is mostly about how really expensive cars appear in David and Sam’s driveway every day. Such as Lamboghinis. The problem in my story is that David and Sam can’t figure out how the cars are getting there. Hope you have fun reading my book!

  61. Bookhead
    October 21, 2009, 7:12 pm

    I just wrote a new story about a parrot who is sold to a king. The parrot saves the king’s life three times, each time asking for a new cage that is more beautiful then the last. The last cage he asks for is made out of the queen’s jewels and gold. The queen gets really angry and kills the king and takes the parrot and the cage and throw them in the sea. What do you think about it?

  62. Bookhead
    October 29, 2009, 11:32 pm

    I’m thinking about submitting into StoneSoup.

  63. morphalisanis
    November 12, 2009, 4:30 pm

    Nice . anyway I am publishing a story called
    WONDERS AT WILLS

  64. robert14
    November 17, 2009, 1:38 pm

    hey im trying to write a stroy. its a mythical novel about this island called Isle of Solaria (island of the sun)and init there arwe two sides the light and the darkness, both sides want to control the island, the are a few of evry creature i couyld think of but the there are three main characters in it… one from the lightness, one from the darkness, and then there is this half angel/demon guy that can be on either side…. i am stuck for the three main characters names =[

  65. girltlk12
    November 22, 2009, 1:06 pm

    Thanks for the name ideas. And hey,robert14 I love your story idea. Do you want to give the characters normal names like Danny or Abby or do you want to give them unusual names like there from a different planet? LIke Solara or Solarisa (I know stupid names just giving an example)

  66. Twvp56
    November 23, 2009, 4:26 pm

    Ever since I was really young I anted to write a book but whenever I start something I get to excited to get to far in the plot for the story so when I go to write it I get stuck and when I try to figure something out for the book a think of another story and I dont ever work on the story I started with.

    Right now I’m working on a story about a girl and her younger brothers. and when her younger brothers get kiddnapped she’s the only one that can save them from a teribble escaped murderer/kiddnapper.I show what I write to my friends, Katie and Kendal,and they say I should get it publeshed but I don’t know how to.
    Then I’m working on what I want to be a seris about a girl that finds out that when she was born she was dying and when the docters couldn’t fix her and said she was dead a vampire came and gave her some of its life making her hair turn from brown to black on will and giving her powers and later on in her life a boy comes up to her and tells her that she is a vampire and that he needs her help.

  67. Twvp56
    November 23, 2009, 4:55 pm

    Writingstar maybe you could use like a nme from another contry like Pierre or Lorenzo. (I don’t know it was an idea.)

  68. DolphinDreamz
    November 28, 2009, 9:46 am

    I’m almost done with my story,do you want to hear it? You can pick from a Sherlock Holmes mystery,a Maddy Goustea mystery or a colonial mystery.
    PLEASE reply. I need to know if my books are good!

  69. heartoftheinuit
    December 18, 2009, 3:13 pm

    I’m writing a book called Heart Of The Inuit. The story takes place thousands of years ago. My friend also has a book but it is about wolfs we both comment on each others books and both hope to get them published I will post my story on hear later please tell me what you think about it.

  70. heartoftheinuit
    December 18, 2009, 3:24 pm

    here is a little bit of my story tell me what you think. ” A sat in that cold dark cave worn out from running. The snow was piled out in front of the cave and all I could hear was the soft sound of my feet as I paced and I wondered how was I was going to get out and when I did how was I supposed to hide from Galen The witch doctor so I finally sat down in a corner an fell asleep unknowing what would happen that morning .” So tell me what you think PLEASE.

  71. volleyballgirl
    December 22, 2009, 5:26 pm

    I am writing a book about a girl who discovers she has the power to read people’s minds. Her boyfriend is incredibly fast, while one of her best friends is amazingly strong, and the other can fly. She and her friends have to learn how to keep their abilities hidden, while also dealing with the conflicts o highschool. But when the girl finds out about a villan who could destroy the world, they have to decide how to cope with the turmoil piling around them. What do you all think?

  72. DolphinDreamz
    January 1, 2010, 5:21 pm

    I love your idea heartoftheinuit! volleyballgirl, have you thought of a name for the villain yet? (By the way pretty cool story!)

  73. DolphinDreamz
    January 1, 2010, 5:30 pm

    I am currently almost finished with the seventh Star Wars. (Hey! Girls can like Star wars too!)It’s called The Hidden, A new villain has arisen in he galaxy determined on destroying the Rebellion which has been thriving since the death of Emperor Palpatine. Unnoticed under the alias of a peace orriented senator he gains information needed to conquer and extinguish the Rebellion once and for all! Only one thing stands in his way, Princess Leia. Read my book for adventure, mystery and much more…

  74. Twvp56
    January 1, 2010, 5:46 pm

    I hsve idea for a book about a world called Paydin that controls the weather on Earth with four gems. But the gem controling the air is missing creating a hole in the o-zone and what happens on Earth happens on Paydin. So a boy named Calvin and the kid ruler of Paydin a girl named Celeste have to travel trough time and space and time to find the air gem before all the atmosphere collapses on itself. What doo you think about that?

  75. DolphinDreamz
    January 2, 2010, 11:09 am

    Cool idea, Twvp56!

  76. ckd1998
    January 3, 2010, 1:11 pm

    I have not written anything, but my friend did over the summer.she was telling our Language Arts 6th period teacher about it, and she was all excited until Jan got to the part where she left it on the park bench….she was kinda bummed then. i think she thought it had been published.

  77. starz321
    January 5, 2010, 4:47 pm

    i am writing a few full fledged novels right now, including 1 trilogy and hundreds of short stories!!! i love writing and i aim to be an author someday… i am also homeschooled and my favorite subjuet is creative writing. is anyone else here homeschooled???
    the biggest thing a am working on is that trilogy that i mentioned. i dont want to tell you too much, i case it does get published but i will tell the main plot. (i am still working out the title) it is mostly about two orphaned kids who are trying to discover their destiny…even if it isnt in this world. unearthly monsters are summonded out of their own world and they are out for the kill- that is to kill the kids. besides the monsters, they have to face an evil sorcerer who wants revenge, and hauntings from the past. but worst of all, they must face the betrayal of one who they called a friend.
    well tell me how you like it and please give me some ideas if you have any. i can asnsewr any questions too. PLEASE ASNSWER TO THIS!!!!! i would really appreciate it.

  78. DolphinDreamz
    January 6, 2010, 8:50 am

    I am homeschooled too!

  79. starz321
    January 6, 2010, 2:49 pm

    sweet,dolphindreamz!!!! =]

  80. starz321
    January 7, 2010, 9:48 am

    ps dolphindreamz… im sooo with u that girls can like star wars!!!! i have all the books and i m a girl!!!

  81. DolphinDreamz
    January 7, 2010, 6:28 pm

    Finally someone who understands me! ;-)

  82. DolphinDreamz
    January 9, 2010, 8:55 am

    Do you want to hear an excerpt from my book? If you do please reply! (I’m not a Jedi! I can’t read your mind!)

  83. starz321
    January 9, 2010, 3:16 pm

    i totally do

  84. Twvp56
    January 10, 2010, 11:15 am

    I have the idea for a book about a world underneath our world and a boy named Charlie is the ruler of it even if he doesn’t know about it. That world underneath our feet (I named it Mantage) is in danger of being found so one of the inhabitants Paydi comes to find Charlie and bring him back to keep Mantage from being found out.

  85. Twvp56
    January 10, 2010, 11:25 am

    I have a book idea about the future about 100 years from now. By just asking the government will geneticly alter you if there’s something that you don’t like about yourself. Some people love the idea of changing themselves to be “perfect”. Others think its a horrible idea and plan to out a stop to it one step at a time. Step 1: dive down from helicopters and begin to putting signs and banners up that say “THE REBELION HAS BEGUN”. Step 2: avenge there leaders suposed death. Step 3: prepare for war against the government.

  86. DolphinDreamz
    January 10, 2010, 8:16 pm

    Star Wars VII: The Hidden

    Gunshots filled the air as Princess Leia fled the city of Macchu. “C’ mon, c’mon!” she muttered as her blaster stubbornly refused to work. There it was! The ship that would be her only escape! So near, but so were the gunshots! “Stop her!” a voice boomed behind her. Leia’s feet yearned to stop running, but she knew to stop would be certain death. The Macchu Air Ship Dock (MASD) was so close the sound of rumbling engines filled her ears.

    “You are sure your men have tracked the Princess?” “Yes Master.” “Very good. Your payment will arrive shortly” “Yes Master.” And with that General Kane left the robed man’s chamber “Ha,ha,ha!” he chuckled sinisterly, “Princess Leia is as good as mine!”

  87. 2whitie
    January 11, 2010, 10:11 am

    I am writing a book that i have been at for a few years. it is called Camp survival. It Is REALLY HARD! sometimes i need to lay down for a bit to get over writers block.

  88. DolphinDreamz
    January 11, 2010, 6:42 pm

    Did you like it? Maybe someday I’ll get it published.

  89. starz321
    January 14, 2010, 12:42 pm

    like it? i LOVE it!! you definitly should get it published!!! wanna hear part of mine??
    may the force be with you!!!

  90. DolphinDreamz
    January 17, 2010, 3:57 pm

    Thanks! I would LOVE to hear your story!

    P.S. I know it will be really good! May the Force be with you too! ;-)

  91. starz321
    January 20, 2010, 7:05 pm

    Minutes went by… Then hours. Still no help came. Before she knew it, night had fallen, casting shadows on the bloodstained ground.
    Each passing breath was agony; she could feel the thick warm blood oozing from the fatal wound in her side. But aside from the pain, all she could think about was that old homeless man in the gutter, back home, all those years ago. He had been right, when he had said that the one she trusted the most would betray her, and she would pay dearly for it. It had scared her-so much that she had pushed it out of her mind.
    But he had been right. And now, all she could think about was Brayden, the boy who had called himself her friend…and just as willingly, taken her life.

  92. starz321
    January 21, 2010, 9:40 am

    sry if ive kept u waiting, dolphindreamz… ive written my story thing in twice but it has’nt shown up!!! :( ill keep trying!!!

  93. DolphinDreamz
    January 22, 2010, 1:17 pm

    It’s okay! I don’t mind!

    P.S. Hope the Force has been with you! ;-) !

  94. DolphinDreamz
    January 22, 2010, 1:19 pm

    By the way is the story above the Star Wars one? It is REALLY cool!

    Way to go!

  95. Twvp56
    January 24, 2010, 12:16 pm

    I have an idea for a book about three teens who have different powers. One is super strong and can fly, One can run super fast and another can disapper and reapper suddenly in a different place. Even though they have normal lives like everyone else one boy finds out that they have powers and finds he can hear and see things up to 100 miles away! So they have to band together and beat an evil villan that can take their super powers away from them. But I need a name for the villan and I need a title. Could you guys help me?

  96. DolphinDreamz
    January 27, 2010, 8:59 am

    Tell us some of the qualities you villain has, that will help us decide on a name. What are some ideas you have for name?

  97. starz321
    January 28, 2010, 10:53 am

    thx dolphindreamz!!!
    that sounds like a cool book Twvp56… a title for you book??? try to think of a dramatic title that should catch the readers attention. since your book is about three teens and super powers, try to think of something that relates to that.
    hope that helps!!!!
    =]

  98. jakdgough
    February 1, 2010, 12:54 pm

    I have a great Idea For a story. But I am not saying anyting about it because I don’t want anyone stealing my ideas

  99. DolphinDreamz
    February 2, 2010, 6:11 pm

    Well if you ever do decide to share your story here, I promise I won’t steal it.

  100. DolphinDreamz
    February 3, 2010, 6:53 pm

    Has anyone here read any on the Narnia books? (They are some of the best books!) I am going to make a series that Narnia inspired me to write called The Witheresby Chronicles. William, Emily,Timmy and Susanna are on summer vacation when they go to their summer mansion, there they fin adventure and a world they didn’t even know existed!
    I know this book is going to be set in the 1900s probably around 1915. Any suggestions on a good time period for mansions, carriages and other things that might be more old-fashioned?

  101. starz321
    February 4, 2010, 9:11 am

    i love the narnia books!!!! i think that sounds like a really good idea…i think the early 1900s are your best bet. (isnt that when the narnia boooks take place too???)

  102. DolphinDreamz
    February 4, 2010, 4:56 pm

    World War II was from 1939 through 1945. I’m thinking a little earlier than that, since they aren’t going to be kids from the war going to the countryside for safety, they’re just on summer vacation. I still need a name for the magical land.
    Any creative ideas?

  103. DolphinDreamz
    February 5, 2010, 5:22 pm

    I just thought of a good name, Animalia.Because in Animalia, you guessed it, the animals rule the country. (And talk!)

  104. starz321
    February 6, 2010, 9:47 am

    oh yea thats a really good idea!!!

  105. DolphinDreamz
    February 6, 2010, 5:39 pm

    Thanks! ;-)

  106. DolphinDreamz
    February 6, 2010, 5:40 pm

    Have you been writing any stories lately?

  107. starz321
    February 8, 2010, 11:34 pm

    dolphindreamz,
    Yea actually i have a few ideas…
    my first idea is about this girl who is in an accident and she goes deaf. the ebginning is ok but i nees some help with the plot. any ideas???
    Also, a few weeks ago, i had an idea. why not write a book that somewhat goes along with the transition that i had going from catholic school to homeschooling. itll be the exact same story that happened to me, except ill use different names for me and my family and friends. so far its coming along good.
    have you been homeschooled you r whole life or have you been to school before???

  108. DolphinDreamz
    February 9, 2010, 5:54 pm

    I went to a private preschool, but went to public school Kindergarden-2nd Grade. I have been homeschooled from 3rd grade through now. I like your ideas for books. For inspiration on your book about the deaf girl try reading Hurt Go Happy.(It was recommended to me by a friend)I’m reading it currently. Have you already thought of a name for the other ‘you’ yet? I could help you woth it if you haven’t yet.

  109. starz321
    February 10, 2010, 2:23 pm

    oh kool… i went to school up until 6th grade.
    i will start a search for that book you recommended. maybe that will help. thanks!!!
    well since my real name is chloe, i was thinking to have another name that started with “c” too. i was thinking maybe claudia or something. if nothing else sparks interest, i will just write it in 1st person (you know, using “i” insead of a name).

  110. DolphinDreamz
    February 10, 2010, 5:52 pm

    I personally (just my opinion) think a good first person story really gets you involved in their life.

    P.S. Maybe you could also read a biography on Helen Keller. I find her life pretty inspiring.

  111. DolphinDreamz
    February 12, 2010, 8:56 am

    If you want to see some of my poems too, go to the April Is National Poetry Month page.

  112. starz321
    February 12, 2010, 2:56 pm

    yea, when i read books written in first person, it seems like i am really there… i love helen keller!!! its amazing how she learned to communicate when she could not see OR hear!!!
    cool i will definatly check out your poems!!!

  113. bat
    February 12, 2010, 7:35 pm

    i have been thinking of writing book, but i get stuck. i have a good idea,but then get scared that the book will be terrible. any ideas?

  114. starz321
    February 13, 2010, 5:07 pm

    bat-
    while you are writing your book, dont try to get it perfectly right the 1st time through. write a draft, and then use that as a guide to make your story even better. go over it two or three times. hopefully, that way, you will eventually find the right words to express yourself.
    and dont put so much perssure on yourself!!! all books are different and there is no right or wrong way to do it!!!
    if you need more help, just give a yell!

  115. DolphinDreamz
    February 13, 2010, 8:49 pm

    bat, I’m sure your book will be great! Just tell yourself that all great authors had to start small, and experiment, before they got published.

  116. starz321
    February 15, 2010, 10:37 pm

    bat-
    while you are writing your book, dont try to get it perfectly right the 1st time through. write a rough draft, then, go over it again and again, making corrections and improving when you think is nessessary. that way, you will (hopefully) find a way to express yourself with your words in the way you think is the best…
    …and dont put so much pressure on yourself!!! there is not right or wrong way to write. if you need help with your book, dont be afraid to ask me!!! :)

  117. DolphinDreamz
    February 25, 2010, 8:52 pm

    Do you do any sports? I love to ice skate. I have a competition coming up soon.

  118. starz321
    February 28, 2010, 5:35 pm

    i love basketball & softball!!! good luck on your skating competiton! =]

  119. DolphinDreamz
    March 2, 2010, 7:36 pm

    Thanks! I’ll tell you how I place it’s not until late March though.

  120. starz321
    March 4, 2010, 9:38 am

    oh ok. i just went skating a few days ago. its fun, but im not very good at it. i can go pretty fast but i still dont know how to stop (its amazing how many cuts and bruises one can get in one day on the ice! =])

  121. DolphinDreamz
    March 4, 2010, 7:52 pm

    Well, you get used to it after three years! ;-) !

    P.S. To stop just push both skates out, scraing the ice. This will slow you down and eventually stop you.

    P.S.S. I thought of something. Maybe we should write a book just for fun on here. For example you write a chapter, I write a chapter and so on.

    DolphinDreamz

  122. DolphinDreamz
    March 5, 2010, 6:33 pm

    P.S.S.S. Scraing is scraping. (Sorry for the typo!)

  123. starz321
    March 6, 2010, 1:56 pm

    thx for the advice!!!! =]

    ohmigosh that is an awesome idea!!!! you go 1st

  124. DolphinDreamz
    March 7, 2010, 2:47 pm

    Cynthia was standing in the middle of the forest. As always she was entranced by the silent beauty and peace. She was in her favorite clearing that she visited almost everyday. Once she had even sen a deer calmly grazing in the shadows. It was spring,and the birds were singing high above her in the cool breeze. Suddenly a bush nearby started to shake. Cynthia, wuth her natural curiousity silently walked over to the bush to investigate…

    Your turn! ;-) !

  125. DolphinDreamz
    March 16, 2010, 12:45 pm

    My ice skating competition went really well, I got 6th in a minor event and 3rd in the main one. I tied for third and almost got second but I was one point lower than the other girl, still it’s really good for my first time on that level! (ALmost everyone alse had been there for a long time!)

  126. MasterLioness
    April 17, 2010, 1:41 am

    I once made a story about how dalmatians got their spots,
    the main characters are two plain white dogs who are sisters.
    I like it and i gave it to my friend.

  127. kkr21
    April 24, 2010, 5:24 pm

    im not a fan of writin im more a drawer and painter

  128. DolphinDreamz
    April 27, 2010, 8:50 pm

    cool kkr21! I love to sketch!!!

  129. Anonymous
    May 14, 2010, 10:18 am

    Thx to my dad, I am going
    to write a story about forest
    animals. The main animal
    is a young wolf named sam.
    It is a story full of suspense
    and war. Sam and his two
    friends, Anthony and Artemis
    go to the Stag King, Sol, for
    help. So sam and his buddies
    learn about being humble, cuz
    when some dogs help them
    and… any way is hard to explane.

  130. MasterLioness
    May 15, 2010, 5:54 am

    I should start writing my forest animal book soon.

  131. babyjay
    May 30, 2010, 2:50 pm

    i really want to publish my one book that i wrote! i love to write books. its a very wonderful thing to do!!!!!!!

  132. Nephthys/Isis
    June 7, 2010, 5:50 pm

    Hi! I’m writing a book about tennager spies, and they go undercover at a school to find a missing, preserved tyrannasaurus egg. And it has fallen into the hands of an evil scientist who will use it for destruction. The worst thing is there is also a spy for the scientist and one of the heroines (Nephthys) falls in love with him! Can the world get any worse? (I probably shouldn’t have said that, because yes, it can.)

    Tell me what you think!

    P.S. I’m writing it with my friends, so if you have any ideas, i will bring them up with my friends

  133. Nephthys/Isis
    June 7, 2010, 6:00 pm

    To DolphinDreamz:

    I am a girl and I LOVE Star Wars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I like your preview of the seventh Star Wars!

  134. mossflower
    June 13, 2010, 4:16 pm

    I have written a story about a twelve year old girl named Heather, who is also a sorceress, because I prefer the term sorceress,(it sounds more magicy and mysterious, doesn’t it?) who saves the world with the help of her friend, a South African foreign exchange student. She had to at least live somewhere in Africa, because she needs to come from the same place Swing Low Sweet Chariot was written. I thought it was Greece at first, you know, ’cause of the chariot thing. But then I saw in my flute book that it was African, so I had to change it. She started off being Ehtiopian, but I needed to use an African country that I knew the language of, and since I know a guy from South Africa, I knew what language they speak there. Anyway, now that you know why Jordan, (that’s her name.) had to live in South Africa, I’ll tell you about the story. Her art teacher is planning to dominate the world, so they both have to defeat her, and a jerky kid I based on my two biggest enemies. The police catch the art teacher, but the cops tell her that she is part of a group like the Death Eaters in Harry Potter. Her principal tells her that she and Jordan are the Chosen Two. One of them has to kill the other like in Harry Potter, and it will happen three years later. Not Heather and Jordan, but the leader of the evil group her art teacher belongs too. It was a choice between the two magic numbers, 3 and 7, and they didn’t need seven years of mental preparation. This is the first story I’ve ever finished. I’ve started writing another one, what happens when Jordan takes over the story, next year. I’ve gotten the first two sentences done, what an accomplishment.

  135. DolphinDreamz
    June 23, 2010, 4:06 pm

    Cool Nephthys/Isis! It’s so hard to find girls who like Star Wars! I like your idea for a book! I personally love spy/mystery books! I kind of gave up on my 7th star wars book though… I didn’t want to at first but there had already been at least 3 people who had carried on from where Return of the Jedi left off. I am now working on 4-5 books. (I’m not sure about one of them.) Tell me if you like these ideas…

    The Witheresby Chronicles

    William,Emily,Timmy and Susanna think it’s going to be an average stay at their family’s summer home in quaint Victorian-Age England until Susanna discovers a secret tunnel in her room, she then discovers a new land with talking animals called Animalia. Soon after William, Emily and Timmy follow suit and are bewildered at the vast land of Animalia. Will their greedy housekeeper betray Animalia for money? Will the Witheresbys be able to avert the Great War in the making? Will they even survive? Find out in The Witheresby Chronicles…

    SPACE CAMP

    Cynthia is dissapointed when she can’t go to Moon River Adventure Camp with her friends, instead she had to go to Space Camp at the Halo Space Center. Thinking that this will be her most boring summer yet she is shocked when their supposedly rocket simulator is a real rocket! Shot up into space with only a limited supply of food and water will all 7 kids survive? Most importantly of all, was it really an accident that the rocket wasn’t a simulator?

    Snowed In

    Mia’s on her way to Alaska to meet her Mom who’s working as a missionary to the Eskimos when her plane crashes in the middle of nowhere. With the pilot dead and her only company her dog, Sally. Will Mia survive the Alaskan wilderness with only God as her guide? Will anyone ever find her?Find out in Snowed In…

    The Wimberly Wood

    Everyone in Kai’s village has always been afraid of the Wimberly Wood that bordered where they lived. People went in and never came out. Even if they did they were so stunned they couldn’t talk about or had gone mad somewhere inside the mazelike forest. But one day when Kai’s mother is sick Kai must ventire into the Wimberly Wood to find the Golden Orchid which nectar can cure all illnesses.

    Sydney on Her Own

    Foster kid Sydney Johnson had no family, no home, and has been moved from foster home to foster home in search of the perfect family. Finally she decides to run away, her oppurtunity comes on a class field trip to the aquarium. She lives at the aquarium avoiding the night guard and steals snacks from the concession stands. Suddenly one night she hears of a heist to steal the aquariums famous and rare Indigo Shark. Will Sydney be found? Will the Indigo Shark be stolen? Find out in this book!

    Please tell me if you like these ideas! (I have created all of these story plots so please do not use them for your own story-writing purposes. Thanks!)

  136. Nephthys/Isis
    July 8, 2010, 6:22 pm

    To DolphinDreamz:

    I don’t think you should give up on the seventh Star Wars. But that’s just me. I would probably just write a story about Obi-Wan when he’s a Padawan. Maybe I’d call it Star Wars: Episode 1/2.

    Here are a couple of my stories.

    (Trying to think of a title)
    Chloe watches the beatiful Alyssa do ballet one day in the theater, and when she asks where she learned such beatiful dancing. Her life gets insanely more comlicated when Alyssa reveals that some girls were not born on this planet. Instead, they were born Zyrgia, a planet in the far reaches of space. They need to learn the skills to survive before they come back. And one of those skills is, yes, ballet.
    Chloe needs to learn these things.

    The Stars are Shining
    There is great peace in the land of Otherworld. The Otherworld is rich in green pastures and azure lakes. And yet, Lindsey wishes for the outside world. A trip out of the Night’s Gate should garuntee that. Will Lindsey find her way back, after she is transported to 21st century, New York City?

    Graceful as a Stream
    Bella lives in Yosemite, and when she finds the nymphs who are there, she learns ballet to charm the Greek gods. She needs to protect the environment, for her friends.

    Lyght and Dark
    Artemisa and her sister, Sonja, are the sun and moon goddess. When Lord Darkholme is going to end the world, they need to stop it. Will they do it in time?

  137. DolphinDreamz
    July 9, 2010, 8:48 pm

    I like your ideas! The Stars are Shining sounds pretty cool! I don’t think I will completely give up on the 7th Star Wars but I will do it for fun, not for being published like at first I wanted too. Are you published? I have one of my poems published. (If you go to the April poem listing then look at the one by me called Winter Song you will see it!) Do you have any ideas for the title of the first story? DD
    :-) !

  138. starz321
    July 12, 2010, 10:44 am

    ohmigosh dolphindreamz its me again- i m sooo sorry i havent written anything in such a long time!!! our computer broke down and everything was messed up from there!!! so…i’m back!!!

  139. starz321
    July 12, 2010, 5:09 pm

    dolphindreamz- please don’t give up with your seventh star wars!!! its sounded sooo good!! (as all your others do!)

    ps-congrats on your skating competition!!! i cant skate for my life!! **wink wink**

    Nephthys/isis-
    welcome to the dogeared – starwars loving girls – writing long and wonderful stories – clan!!! haha
    i like your ideas (especially the 1st one you mentioned, since my name is chloe!!)

  140. Nephthys/Isis
    July 13, 2010, 2:47 pm

    To DophinDreamz:
    I have no idea for the title. Zip.Zero.Nada.Goose eggs. I haven’t the foggiest.

    To starz321:thanks!

    By the way, have either of you seen How to Train Your Dragon and Toy Story 3?
    They are my favorite movies ever!!! : )

    I also forgot one of my stories:

    The Dragon Claw
    Andrea Davidson is going to the Dragonology Academy.
    Will she get her Dragon Master’s license.
    Will she even survive.

    Both of you, tell me which excerpt you would like to hear. I will gradually give you an excerpt from every story even my spy story at the beggining.

  141. DolphinDreamz
    July 14, 2010, 7:39 pm

    WELCOME BACK STARZ321! I was beginning to wonder if you’d moved to Alaska! Do either of you like to write poetry? Oh, I had another ice skating competition in June and got 7th and 2nd. Nephthys/Isis do play any sports? My choice for a preview would be the ballet mystery one. Possible names: The Discovery, Ballet Secrets, Secrets in the Air, Not What It Seems: How My Life Got Extremely Complicated (If it’s in 1st person)
    I am thinking about writing a book about a girl who is walking her sister on a horse when she falls of and dies. She then swears to never go near a horse again, but one day she meets a wild stallion she names Miracle. Will taming the wild horse renew her love of horses or is it just too much? Find out in Miracle. Do you like that idea? DD

  142. Nephthys/Isis
    July 15, 2010, 10:08 am

    DolphinDreamz:

    Miracle sounds amazing.
    I do not really play sports, but I love swimming.
    I like the title Secrets in the Air. it sounds super mystical.

    Starz321:

    please tell me you preview choice!!!

  143. starz321
    July 17, 2010, 9:05 am

    dolphindreamz – I love to write poetry!!! It is such a good way to express yourself!
    Congrats once again on your skating! We came in 3 in my softball league, which is pretty good considering some of the teams we were up against.
    Miracle sounds awesome!!! Once it gets published, could I have a signed copy?? :)

    nephthys/isis – I agree with Secrets in the Air. It pretty much sums up everything you are saying. It’s perfect! For my preview choice, I will pick…Lyght and Dark. That one sounds really good!!
    PS- I havent seen How to Train Your Dragon, but I have seen Toy Story 3. It was really well made. And it was surprisingly funny!!

    Both of You, and Anyone Else Who Wants To
    Listen – Would you like to hear some of my story overviews?? Just say the word.

  144. DolphinDreamz
    August 12, 2010, 9:52 pm

    I would love to hear some of your stories starz321!(And if any of my books ever get published you can definitly have a signed copy!;-)!) That’s great that you got 3rd! Talk to you Soon, DD

  145. smabby1210
    August 14, 2010, 12:29 am

    Hey people! So I have serious writers block. I can usually come up with ideas by just writing a sentence, but I just can’t find anything. I’m not asking for story ideas, I just want to know if anyone’s got some ideas for getting rid of writers block. Thx in advance. TTYL!!

  146. Nephthys/Isis
    August 16, 2010, 5:12 pm

    To smabby1210: just write something that is randomally crossing your mind. Hamsters, how hot that guy is that lives down the street, how wars are absolutely stupid,bunnies, I WANNA HAVE A VAMPIRE BOYFRIEND LIKE BELLA, Spagetti and meatballs is my favorite food in the entire world…you get the idea. And then just randomly smush it all together.
    The hot guy who lives down the street is a vampire who now is your boyfriend (like in TWILIGHT.) And you two now have to stop the hamsters and bunnies who are fighting a war over spagetti and meatballs which is stupid…actually all wars are stupid…

    And then you write it out. Hopefully that’ll help!

    Tell me your story idea if my method works!

  147. Nephthys/Isis
    August 16, 2010, 6:09 pm

    Here you go Starz321:

    A thousand conversations flowed all into the distinct buzz that marked the sound of a party. The sky had lost it’s flame from the sunset a long time ago. It was too early for the moon to be shown, though. Couples were dancing while the DJ played his songs.
    Then out of the blackness, a figure approached. No one saw her, for she had a cloak, black as the night itself. A pale, almost silvery, hand reached out from the cloak’s many folds, and made a small gesture. All conversation halted. The CD stopped, and time seemed frozen. In a quiet, low voice the figure said, “You’re late.”
    Another figure approached from the opposite side of the plaza.
    In an equally low voice,their voice even,” I’m sorry. I had to check the cloud cover. We need the cover. Don’t blame me you had more time than I do.”
    They both laughed and ran toward each other.
    As they ran, their hoods fell free. As they did, the area lit up like somone had turned a light on.
    They met in a hug that could’ve defined hug itself. “It’s been so long, Sonja,” the silvery one murmured.
    “Oh, I know, Artemisa,” Sonja said.
    They pulled apart.
    “But you know why we are here,” Artemisa said.
    Sonja’s eyes, like the sun itself, dimmed.
    “Darkholme.”
    She said the name like a curse.
    “Yes, the Black Holes are gathering. We will need to go underover at this school. Or else, Earth falls.”
    Sonja nodded.
    “We should go,” Artemisa said.
    “Okay, but can I ask you something?”
    “Sure.”
    Sonja’s mouth turned into a smile.
    “Which one do you want?”
    Artemisa gaped at her in disbelief, knowing what she meant.
    “The world is just possibly about to end, and you’re asking me which boy I want!?!”
    “You said you would.”
    There was a pause.
    “Fine, then. That one there.”
    She pointed.
    “Good choice,”she said, approving. “As for me, I pick that one over there.”
    Silence.
    “And now we go.”
    They stepped backward to the edge where they had been before.
    This time, Sonja made the gesture.
    The party resumed.
    Both stepped back into the cloud bank behind them.
    A minute later to the oohs and ahhs of the partygoers, the full moon appeared behind a tree, shining brightly like never before.

    So tell me what you think, anybody!

  148. iluvharrypotter
    August 22, 2010, 7:03 pm

    too many comments!!

    Anyway, i am writing lots of novels, i finished one and i am trying to get it published. also, i am writing a screenplay for a movie i made up, Nerdy Cinderella. That’s where Cinderella is a nerd and s slightly snotty, and there is a witch godmother who can’t do magic, and a hobo who like Salvia Feet fishing. And a secretary to keep the hobo, who is also the narrator, on track. And stepsisters who are wishy washy and not very smart. and an evil step mother who like Panda Express.

  149. Nephthys/Isis
    August 26, 2010, 1:55 pm

    I found a good book for writers. It’s called Spilling Ink: by Anne Mazer and Ellen Potter. It’s good!

  150. starz321
    September 1, 2010, 2:23 pm

    Ok. None of my stories have titles yet, so just bear with me.

    I have one about a girl who loves to read, but is in an accident and becomes blind. It takes place in the time when Braille was invented.

    Another one is about a kid who is murdered and must journey through the underworld horrors to move on to the Egyptian “Next Life.”

    Yet another about a magical world seperate from ours. (OK I admitt, it is common. But I have my own special twist on it.) The world is in danger from an ancient evil and the two kid rulers are the ones who have to battle it. I hope to make this one a trilogy.

    And another during medival times, where a brave knight leaves his family and friends to get revenge on the people who killed his brother.

    Now,anyone who’ve I’ve (hopefully) intrigued, please write back saying which one you want to hear an exerpt from!!!

    Nephthys/Isis – WOW that is amazing!!! Keep up the good work!!! ;) And ohmigosh, I’ve read Spilling Ink a few weeks ago, and it was by far the best instruction book I have ever read in my WHOLE life!!! I reccomend it it anyone who has the slightest notion of wanting to be a writer!

    DolphinDreamz – Thanks!! :)
    While we are on the subject, have you ever read any poems by Edgar Allen Poe? I like his stuff, although some of it is a tad creepy.

    smabby1210 – When you get caught in the nightmare of writer’s block, quit working on your story and take a long walk. Think about something different for a while. Read a book. Maybe you will get some ideas from there.
    I also second what Nephthys/Isis said. Write whatever comes to mind (even if it doesn’t make any sense at all.) Your sure to get an idea then.
    (Oh yea, you could also tell us Dogeared people about your plot. We’d love to help!)

  151. starz321
    September 1, 2010, 2:29 pm

    another quick question…I am taking a vote. Would you rather read about a kid who ran away and lived at the library, or some random person’s attic???

    Whoever is out there and cares enough, PLEASE ANSWER SOON!!!!

  152. Nephthys/Isis
    September 4, 2010, 3:58 pm

    To starz321: All of the stories you are doing sound absolutely amazing!!!
    My vote is I would rather read about a kid living in some random person’s attic.
    To DolphinDreamz: I am really sorry about not updating. I know your vote is Secrets in the Air, but 6th grade started!!! Maybe I’ll be able to get to it soon.

    Spilling Ink rocks!!!

  153. DolphinDreamz
    September 8, 2010, 9:06 pm

    Nephthys/Isis: I think that sample of your book sounds intriguing. I’ll try to check out Spilling Ink.

    Starz321: I would rather hear about someone in a library. Some of Edgar Allan Poe’s poems give me chills. I LOVE the idea you had about the blind girl. (It would be SO cool if she meets Louie Braille in the book)

  154. madison
    September 25, 2010, 5:47 pm

    i am riting obout a blue rose that fals from the sky.and lets see if i become famus.

  155. iLUVbooks
    October 4, 2010, 12:02 pm

    heya guys I just read all ur comments and it took me 45 minutes! I lurve writing AND reading books! I always start writing books but I never finish them because I always come up with more ideas! right now im trying to right a book about a family that go on a month cruise and their ship crashed and when they wake up ion the morning their floating on their beds in the sea and she cant see anyone and then this black dot starts floating towards her and she thinks its a shark so she uses her hands as paddles and then the black dot catches up to her and it ends up being her teenage sister in her bed still asleep. when the teenager wakes up they decide to paddle to a distant island and finally they get there and she goes into the forest to find food and she finds a little puppy and she names him Milo. I actually have a puppy called milo so datz how i decided to have a puppy in it. trust me but every one of my stories has an animal in it. im not sure wat shud happen next and i dont know shud i publish it or not cuz i think itz gonna be bad but im gonna post it on here and u can comment to me and tell me wat u think wen its done. im scared of showing my frends and family my stories so sometimes my sisters and my brother try to steal my stories to read them. wat shud i do to keep them safe or shud i just let them go? im scared to read them out in class even though there is only 11 of us and sopmetimes i dont even want to show my teacher. wat shud i do?

  156. Nephthys/Isis
    October 4, 2010, 5:32 pm

    To iLUVbooks: It is scary. But actually, you can ask people for comments. I always got really scared by sharing my stories. Even today, I wrote a poem with a friend, and neither of us wanted to share it. And if you still don’t feel comfortable, you can always hide between the mattress and the box thingy in your bed. Or in your pillow. Or put it in plain sight, under your homework for school or something.

    To DolphinDreamz: I know I havn’t given you your preview choice, but I kinda lost interest in it.

    I started working on my spy story though! Yay! Record Achievment! Victory Dance!

  157. iLUVbooks
    October 5, 2010, 10:18 am

    Thank u Nephthys/Isis. dat means a lot to me and good idea bout where to hide it but im afraid because everyone might think that its bad. i want to get it published but if my frends read it and think its bad they wont like me and my family would read it to and den dey wud tease me. im confused and dont know wat to do and im not sure wat shud happen next in my story and no matter where i hide it my brother and sisters still find it. and since my sisters r older than me dey luv to tease me but my brother doesnt as much since hes younger. im ten and the second youngest in my family so everyone is quite old in my family the oldest child being 25. 25 sister of mine used to like writing stories wen she was my age too and den she lost intrest and im afraid i will lose intrest too but i dont wanna lose intrest cuz everyone says dat me and my sister r really alike. thx for de encouragement. now wen i finish my island story im gonna show mom but only mom. thx. from iLUVbooks

  158. starz321
    October 13, 2010, 8:05 pm

    Oh my gosh, I feel your pain, iLUVbooks! my siblings are always trying to read my stories!!! I SOMETIMES show them my stuff so they’ll leave me alone, but there are some I am keeping for myself. I hide the rest of my stuff way in the back of my closet. Personally, I love sharing my stories with people I don’t know, like on blogs, so I don’t get offended if they critisize it. We on the Dogeared blog would love to hear your stuff!!! Don’t be afraid to ask us for opinions or encouragement!

    Dolphindreamz, this is for you:

    I want to scream! Can’t they understand how much I am hurting inside? I won’t ever be able read again!
    As I go upstairs to my room, I trip over every step. In my fury, I miss the door and run into the wall. Stupid eyes! Everything is always black, still, quiet… Why couldn’t I have died with my parents? Without my books, I don’t know what to do. Tears well up and I collapse on my bed. I cry myself to sleep.

    “I have good news, though. Right now, a certain man is trying to invent a system for the blind to read…”
    I sit bolt upright in bed, John’s words echoing in my head, from yesterday. In my anger, I had blocked him and his words out. Could it be? Could someone be inventing a new system for the blind to read? Is there hope after all?
    “That’s what I must do,” I say outloud. I must find this man, and find out if it is true. What had he said his name was? Oh yes, Louis Braille.

    That was the blind girl story, in case you forgot. Hope ya like it!! :)

  159. Nephthys/Isis
    October 15, 2010, 5:16 pm

    To iLUVbooks: Again, if you want to hide your stuff-totally cool.

    To starz321: the blind girl story sounds amazing! Keep it up.

    My spy story is at home, and I’m at the library. Otherwise I would tell you what I’ve got of it.

    To everybody, today is I Love Bunnies Day!!! ;)
    (Not really! ;P)
    (\__/)
    (=..=)
    (_)(_)

  160. Nephthys/Isis
    November 6, 2010, 4:50 pm

    I wrote a poem on the poetry month article, just out of random. Can you go check it out, DolphinDreamz?

    The spy story has changed quite a bit. If you would like to hear an excerpt, please tell me!(But don’t be dissapointed if it takes me awhile.)

    By the way, has anybody ever seen the movie “Clue”?
    It is so amazingly awesome!

    I am just feeling poetic today! ;P

  161. GylfieTheOwl
    November 27, 2010, 7:55 pm

    I was going through my old notebook and found a story i started when I was 9. i’m going to rewrite it sometime!

  162. DolphinDreamz
    December 14, 2010, 8:35 pm

    I’m sooooooooooooo sorry I haven’t written in so long! I just moved and have been very busy with a lot of my family coming over for Thanksgiving. I am currently writing a ton of books: Space Camp, The Witheresby Chronicles, A Warriors Book, The Wimberley Wood, Sydney on Her Own, The Kai Chronicles (If you like Avatar: The Last Airbender that book is for you) and Snowed In. PHEW! I know- I’m in way over my head! starz321: I absolutely LOVE your sample of your book! Keep up the good work! GylfieTheOwl: I did that with one of my books too! Nephthys/Isis: You’re poem is really cool!

    Tell me if you want a sample of any of my new books or have questions about what they’re about. I might not reply right away because I don’t have good computer signal at my house. DD

  163. Nephthys/Isis
    January 3, 2011, 1:49 pm

    To DolphinDreamz: it would be fun to read an example of Space Camp.
    I’m writing 4 books AND a song with my little brother. WOW!!!

  164. DolphinDreamz
    January 19, 2011, 8:24 pm

    Nephthys/Isis: Here is a little sample from Space Camp:

    The car sped down the highway with me in the backseat. I was watching the scenery fly by the car in quick succession, “We’re here Cynthia.” Mom saud from the driver seat as we pulled into the HALO Space Center parking lot. All of my friends had gone to the new cool camp called Moon River Adventure Camp. The only thing was it cost $200 a week and my family just couldn’t afford it. The space camp at the HALO Space Center on the other hand, was only $40 dollars a week and it was either that or staying home all summer while all my friends were at camp. I chose Door 1. I jumped out of the car and waited for Mom to gather he stuff, turn off the car, shut the door, lock the car, make sure she had everything and walk over. We entered the lobby and walked over to the check-in desk for the camp. A lady with a blonde ponytail checked me in and told me where to go so I could meet the counselor. “Have a nice time!” Mom said as I started through the maze of hallways, looking at all the exhibits as I went. Then a big pair of doors appeared in front of me. I walked through them and gasped at what I saw, a giant room with a space simulator, life-sized model of a rocket, and machinery everywhere. “Ah, you must be Cynthia!” I turned to see a man who must’ve been in his late twenties standing wiht a group of kids. To my surprise there were two other girls, I had been worried I would be the only girl. “Yes,that’s me.” I replied and was greeted with awkward silence. “Well,” the man said breaking the tension, “let’s get started on our tour.”

    Hope you liked it! DD

  165. AndreaofSeriah
    January 23, 2011, 12:22 pm

    Hey Guys!
    I am new here, but I am not new to writing. I have a single folder on my computer stuffed with story ideas and I have one I have turned into a novel. I am still writing it and it is over 30,000 words right now.

    I am going to post a bit of it and if you like it, please let me know and I can send you a link to my story’s website.

    Oh and BTW: All stories posted are copyrighted by me. If you copy them and claim them as your own, you will get a HUGE lawsuit and I have proof of my claims as first author (dates, character and story outlines). Just letting you know… be warned.

    Well, Enjoy! :D

    Chapter One:

    She screamed in mortal agony, but she knew that her screams did not fall on sympathetic ears. This was where she needed to be the most fearless and without pain, but she was living in pain and fear in the horrible prison. Another wave of pain entered her blood stream and raced around her body, leaving a feeling that she was on fire and burning from the inside out. It was poisoning her mind, her heart and her soul. She knew she would never be the same, if she did get out, of which the chances were dwindling. As she tried to hold back another scream, her field of vision began to fade. The last she saw before fading away was a weredemon, taunting her and… she didn’t know what else because her conscienceness slipped into the past and she began to relive what she had done….

    She was much smaller and she could feel the arms of another human begin holding her, and the gentle, but quick motion of the person walking. She turned in her sleep and drank in the peaceful, sweet scent of an elderly woman. She was handed to another person, a young man this time.
    “Demetré, she needs caring for.” the woman told him.
    Andrea, for that was her name, was carried into the nursery and given to the nurses to be cared for. After a bath, a feeding and getting some new clothing, she was lain down in a crib next to a rambunctious little boy.
    “Shh, Aidan.” whispered the nurse. “Your destiny will soon unfold. Sleep.” And Aidan closed his golden eyes and fell asleep. Hearing the gentle rise and fall of her neighbor’s breathing, Andrea soon fell asleep too.

    Want more? :D

    -T.C.

  166. Nephthys/Isis
    January 25, 2011, 6:26 pm

    Wow!
    DolphinDreamz: Space Camp sounds so cool!
    I like the name Cynthia!
    Bit of trivia: Cynthia is one of Artemis’s names! Which is so fitting for the space story!
    AndreaofSeriah: Your preview of your story was so good! I absolutely LOVED it!

  167. Nephthys/Isis
    January 25, 2011, 6:43 pm

    Here’s a preview of my first chapter of the spy story:
    PLEASE NOTE: THIS IS NOT THE FULL CHAPTER. I REPEAT. THIS IS NOT THE FULL CHAPTER.

    “Where is it? Danged thing.”
    I silently cursed my iPod.
    I reached into The Box, fishing around for it. Of course, it was probably buried under my German dictionary, my South African flute, 2 pairs of sunglasses, 3 pocketknifes, and lock picksand…well, you get the general idea.
    I also have several illegal weapons in there, so don’t even think about going near it.
    As soon as I found it, (Under the laptop and Danish copy of William Shakespeare’s Hamlet, by the way. Figures.) I scrolled through my playlist.
    Now, I have a couple rules about my iPod.
    #1: Absolutely NO cuss or swear words.
    #2: Must have Broadway.
    #3: Must have nature sound.
    #4: Must have Vocal Majority.
    #5: Must have Simon and Garfunkle.
    And finally, number 6,
    If it can make me dance, it’s on my iPod.
    I listened to my favorite song, Like a Bridge Over Troubled Waters by Simon and Garfunkle, when a VERY angry voice behind me said, “No you don’t!”

    Constructive critism appreciated.

  168. AndreaofSeriah
    February 5, 2011, 12:38 pm

    Great Nephthys/Isis! It sounds cool!

    DolphinDreams: Cool idea, maybe some more detail.

    -Andrea

  169. DolphinDreamz
    February 7, 2011, 7:34 pm

    Cool stories AndreaofSeriah and Nephthys/Isis!

  170. DolphinDreamz
    February 7, 2011, 7:41 pm

    I just started a new book it’s called the ‘Orehrepus Academy for the Gifted aka Superheroes in Training’The book is about a girl named Katy who has invisibility powers and she has to be transfered to the school because of her always skipping class. At the school she meets lots of other girls who are just like her and they quickly become friends. One day Katy is selected for showing promise as a superhero and is moved to the superhero in training class. The school isn’t without dangers though- the government- curious as to where it’s money is going has sent kid spies to the school to see what it’s using the money for. Now Katy has to be careful who she can trust because if the government became aware of kids with superpowers they would try to experiment on them… or worse.

  171. iLUVbooks
    February 10, 2011, 11:20 am

    cool stories guys. if you want i could post an extract from me series of books Girls,Girls,Girls. i have wrote one and i am in the middle of writing my second. i also love sketching and i made a scrapbook. i stick my pictures and things i like and cinema tickets and stuff in there and sometimes i draw a picture. itz really cool way to get creative and at the moment im writing a cool poem that i can also post if you like!

  172. Nephthys/Isis
    February 10, 2011, 5:27 pm

    This is the full first chapter! Yay!

    Chapter One
    “Where is it? Danged thing.”
    I silently cursed my iPod.
    I reached into The Box, fishing around for it. Of course, it was probably buried under my German dictionary, my South African flute, 2 pairs of sunglasses, 3 pocketknives, and lock picks and…well, you get the general idea.
    I also have several illegal weapons in there, so don’t even think about going near it.
    As soon as I found it, (Under the laptop and Danish copy of William Shakespeare’s Hamlet, by the way. Figures.) I scrolled through my play list.
    Now, I have a couple rules about my iPod.
    #1: Absolutely NO cuss or swear words.
    #2: Must have Broadway.
    #3: Must have nature sound.
    #4: Must have Vocal Majority.
    #5: Must have Simon and Garfunkle.
    And finally, number 6,
    If it can make me dance, it’s on my iPod.
    I listened to my favorite song, Like a Bridge Over Troubled Waters by Simon and Garfunkle, when a VERY angry voice behind me said, “No you don’t!”
    Callie’s eyes seemed to be boring a hold through mine.
    “You are NOT going to the orientation looking like that.”
    “They won’t care. They never care.”
    “I care.”
    “Please,” Katie said. A note of tension crept into her voice. “We’ll be late!”
    “No, we won’t,” we chorused at her.
    She sighed. “They one thing you guys agree on just has to be your timekeeping,” she muttered.
    We both glared at her with our ‘I’ll kill you just as soon as I kill Callisto/Nike’ look.
    “Come on,” I said. “The new kids coming in won’t care if I wear jeans and a T-shirt to their orientation.”
    “Yes, they will.”
    “Maybe you do, Callisto. But they don’t.”
    “DON’T CALL ME CALLISTO!”
    You can guess that most of our conversation consisted of this.
    “Guys-”
    Katie tried to intervene, but Callie was in the middle of yelling at me.
    “FINE!”
    We both stared at her. See, usually, Katie is a pretty level-headed person. She usually doesn’t blow up.
    “WE ARE GOING TO BE LATE! AND SO HELP ME, IF I HAVE TO DRAG YOU THERE, I WILL.”
    Her blue eyes blazed, and instantly, or fashion issues were forgotten. Thirty seconds later, we were on our way.
    We were only seventeen seconds late, but you should’ve seen the look on our headmaster’s face. He’s my stepdad, and I often have dinner with him Saturdays while I’m at school, but right now, I was just another of his students.
    But then, my dad and him both had been late once.
    Stop it, I thought.
    I shoved out the unwelcome memories. Besides, Dave’s speech had begun.
    “Welcome to New Tech@Coppell High School. Some of the older students know exactly how new-” here some snickers broke out, and amused looks were exchanged”-and then you younger ones don’t.
    “And since a select few of their party displayed such excellent punctuality, the sophomores will do the actual orientation for the freshmen.”
    The entire ninth grade turned to glower at us three. Callie should have been concerned about her own personal health and safety right then, but she just simply smiled and said, “Fine. As long as you tell us when he’s coming.”
    The entire sophomore class’s look changed from anger to surprise. I felt shocked myself. What did she mean?
    “Very well,” Dave sighed. “I suppose.
    “For the first time in history, a new student is being taken on who is not a freshmen. He will be in the sophomore class.”
    I felt like I had been punched in the stomach and been tripped. Whoever he was, he was making history in this school. And he hadn’t even crossed the threshold yet!
    “Now off you go, Miss Odgen. You do have a freshmen orientation to do.”
    There was a huge scraping sound as the chairs were pulled back.
    We all filed into the hallway, and the junior and senior years headed back to their dorms, while the freshmen milled around, between sophomores who were really, really reluctant to do this.
    “How did you know about that guy?” I whispered to Callie.
    She shrugged. “My parents were the people that found him.”
    Just before 8:00 P.M., Callie cleared her throat, and started.
    “Like our headmaster said, welcome to New Tech. And as he hinted earlier, you guys don’t really know exactly how new. Let me explain.”
    She took a breath and continued.
    “To be down to the point, we receive the newest technology the government can offer. We take their products and improve them.
    “Our alumni include some of the most famous names in history. Like the ones you hear about all the time in history class.”
    Another sophomore named Troy Bourne chimed in. “We’ve built civilizations some of you can only dream about. We’ve gathered intelligence from every culture, and now, the future will lie in your hands someday,” Troy said.
    I knew it was my turn. “And not only did we create the world of yesterday, but we have living legends out there right now.”
    A girl named Elizabeth -according to her name tag- raised her hand. As soon as she spoke, I could tell that she was the brains of the group.
    “Does this mean-” she started, seeming to not want to end her question.
    I grinned. “Yep. Welcome to spy school.”

  173. Nephthys/Isis
    February 10, 2011, 5:37 pm

    Also, for Secrets in the Air, DolphinDreamz, I got thinking. Why only girls? Why not guys? So what if Chloe and Alyssa came from a planet where the females of the Zyrgian (it would be called Zyrgia II) culture go to live ’cause the guys run the government and think the women are only good for cooking and cleaning and having babies and looking pretty? And what if that government doesn’t like Alyssa because she often vocally expresses her views, and they kidnap her to take her for “re-learning” and Chloe had to go rescue her?

    I shall go and write a long and wonderful story called Secrets in the Air for you now, DolphinDreamz!

    Just thought you might want to know! Ha ha!

  174. DolphinDreamz
    February 26, 2011, 10:23 am

    Nephthys/Isis: Cool 1st chapter! Also I really like the idea for Secrets in the Air! DD

  175. Man of the world
    March 20, 2011, 9:41 am

    Here are some of my ideas
    1. A group of robbers decides to run away to another city after a narrow escape from the police in a robbery that went horribly wrong, but something goes wrong with that too.
    Name: Roadkill

    2. I haven’t actually thought much of this story. I know it has something to do with a much disliked, unintelligent boy who forms a group called The Plastic Eaters.
    Name: The Club of the Plastic Eaters

    3. A man starts losing his money one day after his finger starts itching, through some accidents, misunderstandings and just plain bad luck. Plus, his name is Charles Manson and his fingerprints spell out the word “Misfortune”.
    Name: Son of Man and Miss of Fortune

    Maybe I’ll post the first sentences of each of these and some new ideas later. Till then, so long, kid.

  176. Man of the world
    March 23, 2011, 8:16 am

    Update: name of idea no. 3 book has been changed to Son of Man, Miss Fortune

  177. DolphinDreamz
    March 24, 2011, 10:14 pm

    Man of the world: You’re ideas are very intresting. I can’t wait until you post more about them. DD

  178. Anonymous
    March 26, 2011, 12:45 am

    Note on book no.3: I originally wrote it in Urdu when I was in grade 4. The main charcter was nameless, and it was really short. It just so happened that one day, our teacher asked us to write a story on superstitions and then, within a few minutes, I had created almost the whole story and later, I read it aloud to my class too. They told me that mine was the best story from the whole class. By the way, I think I must have changed the title at least a hundred times.

  179. AndreaofSeriah
    March 31, 2011, 5:48 pm

    Hey guys!
    Guess what?! I’m gonna get my book self published as an ebook!! I finished up writing it and now, after its done editing and I get the cover worked out, its gonna go out to the world! It should go up on amazon within the next six months under the title, “Past Is Present”.

    Good luck all!!
    -Sincerely,
    Andrea

  180. DolphinDreamz
    April 10, 2011, 5:27 pm

    AndreaofSeriah: It’s so cool that you’re getting you’re book published as an e-book! I will keep my eye out for it! DD

  181. Nephthys/Isis
    April 21, 2011, 2:45 pm

    I know what I’m going to name my spy story. It’s going to be called I WASN’T HERE, because ya know, she’s a spy, and you know those gas stations where the restroom has a bunch of messages on the wall, saying, _____ was here?
    So she’s not there.
    dun Dun DUN!

  182. DolphinDreamz
    April 22, 2011, 3:04 pm

    Cool title Nephthys/Isis! Lol! DD

  183. coraaamelia
    June 22, 2011, 8:17 am

    i write a bunch of stories but not a book but i got the idea country surfer ’bout me and my family but in the story i have an older brother and in real i dont love to write

  184. Nephthys/Isis
    November 19, 2011, 3:00 pm

    I’m back!
    Anyway, I got a story idea for a version of Cinderella. It’s title is Emberava.

    Emberava is the story of a teenage girl during her senior year of high school. The only way for her to escape her miserable life is the theatre department. She gains the lead in her class play, The Steadfast Tin Soldier, but is understudy to the lead in the school musical, Cinderella. Ani, a rebellious teen, takes Emberava under her wing and takes her to a school dance, where for the Midnight Waltz, the gentlemen have to choose to dance with a girl they did not accompany, Alexander Hayes dances with her. He doesn’t know who the girl he danced with is, but he’s never felt this way about a girl before, making his controlling girlfriend, Dana Hyden, jealous. Dana breaks her leg at a volleyball meet, and so she cannot make Cinderella as the lead, making Emberava the star. Dana finds out that Emberava is the one who danced with Alex, and she convinces Emberava’s stepsisters to lock her in her room the night of The Steadfast Tin Soldier and Cinderella. What will happen? Read Emberava to find out!

    DUN DUN DUN!

  185. doggielover4
    November 29, 2011, 4:55 pm

    I love to write. It’s my favorite hobby. I am writing two books now. One is for my cousin for a Christmas present and the other I’m making with my friend. It is so much fun and I wish to be an author. My Languge Arts teacher says I am one of the best writers in my class. I wish I could publish some of my creations. That would bee a dream!!! I’ve had other dreams; this one’s my top by a landslide. Ever since my teacher said how good I was, I’ve been writing and writing!! Well, wish me good luck. Soon, some of you might see a new book in stores by me!!! :)

  186. doggielover4
    November 29, 2011, 5:25 pm

    Man! I love to write; I have so much in my brain of what my next book is going to be about….you know, after i finish the other two. LOL

    Chapter 1
    It’s not just an ordinary day when you walk around to house, then find your little sister lying on the couch, half alive, half dead. That’s what happened to me on that night, that awful night, of September 18, 1990.
    I walked out to the bus, my little sister, Brianna, at my side. It was an early, gloomy, Wednsday morning, fog still hanging in the air. Our gravel driveway crumbled as we jogged out to the end, to the waiting bus. I could see the impatient bus driver drumming her fingers on the steering wheel. I sped up, Brianna right on my heels.
    We came onto the bus, and I sat down in the front, next to my friend since kindergarten, Holly Gibbs. She was dozing, her head laying on the window, her breath fogging up the glass. I wonder of what she was dreaming. I had the strangest dream the previous night. Of course, I always have the craziest of dreams: I was in my driveway, and there was large storm clouds in front of me. The thunder crashed and lightning flashed in the blakened sky in front of me. The weird thing was, the lightning was a light pink, coming from the ground, not from the sky. I was in a pirate costume, as if I was at a costume pary beforehand. My legs were walking, uncontrollably, to the way of the storm. There was the sound of footsteps around me, but no one was there. I was breathing slowly, lightly, as if there were no worries in my life. Rain started to pour down on me. Suddenly, a car had zoomed in front of me; i was hit. The man inside laughed evilly, and my head spun in circles. Breath leaving my lungs, i fell to the ground. My costume became a blanket and the world spun. The car disappeared; I then saw me, laying in a coffin. My parents, and Brianna were at my side. I was looking down at my unmoving body. I had died. I was looking at my body as if I were a soul.
    “Jenna? Hey, are you ok?” Holly looked at my, shaking my shoulders.
    “Huh? Oh, yeah yeah….I’m fine.”
    “You were sleeping. You were mumbling. You sounded, um, uncomfortable.”
    I looked at her, uneasily, my thoughts drifting back to that horrible dream. I turned and stared out the window, not listening not Holly, but listening to a small voice that just came into my head.
    You will live, darling, it said to me. You will survive!

    What do you guys think!? I think that’s my best work I’ve ever done!! Very good work for a 12 year old like me. :)

  187. DolphinDreamz
    December 6, 2011, 9:47 pm

    Nephthys/Isis: Glad you’e back!

    doggielover4: Yes, that was very good! I think with a little work you could definitely acheive your dreams of becoming a writer! I know I would buy your books! :)

    ~DD

  188. doodles0228
    December 31, 2011, 12:07 am

    Doggielover4: I think you could really do good as a writer… I know I would buy the book!

  189. Nephthys/Isis
    January 22, 2012, 6:20 pm

    Hi, guys. I got a lot of good ideas from my dreams. Does anybody else get good ideas from their dreams? And doggielover4, that really seems like a good story, no? I got another idea for a book. It’s working title is Cassidy, and it’s about a teenage gangster named Cassidy in New York whose gang goes about doing good, but when the rival gang starts picking them off one by one, what will she do? This story actually came from a dream, but I mostly manipulated it to be a more less frightening story than what my dream was like (my dream actually scared me to pieces). I only went back to sleep because I was so tired (heh heh).

  190. DolphinDreamz
    February 23, 2012, 12:30 pm

    Nephthys/Isis, I’ve gotten ideas from dreams before too. :) Cassidy sounds like a cool idea, I think you should totally make it into book.

  191. leopard
    March 11, 2012, 7:52 am

    i have written a 400 page story about a girl called Lucinda in the 1900′s. and a story called; 9not telling so u don’t copy!) that’s 70 pages so far.

  192. leopard
    March 11, 2012, 7:53 am

    my friend is 15 and she’s publishing a book. u can publish books (kids) in dubai here.

  193. monkey lover
    April 29, 2012, 4:51 pm

    my goal is to publish a book before im 17 im writing a book about a biography on helen keller any ideas?

  194. ladybug786
    October 23, 2012, 8:38 pm

    I am working on a few books. One is on a little girl who makes a friend of the new girl at school. The next one is of a Queen who is the wife to a bad king. But she dies soon. then her son leads a war on the bad king and saves the kingdom. He is a good king and his queen is a poor girl who’s mom and dad were killed by the Bad king but then she finds her dad and mom were not killed and have deen hiding all the time.

  195. dreamerswritersreaders
    April 13, 10:37 am

    Well I love writing and writing books and reading of course It’s just I plan for my books to have 21 Chapters and 5000 pages and I end with 21 pages and 7 Chapters. I just finished a book today actually about a storm a girl and a penguin but it’s hopeless. When I’m older I’ll rewrite it so it’s long get It published and hopefully live my dream life as a writer…

  196. dreamerswritersreaders
    April 13, 10:38 am

    There are so many people who want to write and it kind of makes me feel down. I’ve always wanted to be unique and always wondered if I should give up my dream to be something more unique. How many of the percentage of people who want to be writers become writers anyway? Most of them I think well I wish everyone who wants to be a writer the best

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